Looks good! Just a few nit-picky questions:
In the Local on-site and remote services section, it says: "Backups - Offsite Online Backup service." Should the words Online and Backup be capitalized?
Offsite and Onsite are spelled both with a hyphen and without one. Inconsistency when saying "1 hour", "2-hour", "30-minute" with whether hyphens are used or not.
In green box at top, should it say "For small- to medium- sized businesses,"?
In Pay-As-YouGo Pricing, in Regular Off-site: $99 section, the word "Under" should not be capitalized.
Maybe a little confusing to put Prepaid price under Pay-As-You-Go section? If it's prepaid, then it's not Pay-As-You-Go?
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